You are always on my mind
from the moment I wake up when the sun starts to shine
even in my dreams, I dream about you
you are forever with me, there is only YOU
I'm hoping everyday when I open my door
that you'll stand right before me and
surprise me with a 'hello'
Do you know that I sleep with your photo
under my pillow?
And that I cried myself to sleep last night
because I couldn't talk to you as much as I liked!
Early this morning before fasting
I looked at all your photos
and missed you my husband most
I gazed at that 'special' photo that you sent
the one that is nature's perfect work of a man
it's my favourite photo you know
it's the most intimate
part of yourself you showed...
to me your wife who cherishes you very much
she hopes you'll with her soon get in touch
Your face keeps appearing in front of my eyes
your smile, your eyes and your soft sighs
sometimes I think about how you react
when I talk about Zee TV...you hate that!
How you'd throw your head back and tell me I'm crazy
and that I'm watching too many Bollywood movies
Why is it when I do call you once in awhile
you don't sound your usual loving self...
but very serious in your style?
It hurts me so because I want to hear your loving voice
not some grave tone that I have to listen to...
but I don't have a choice!
You set the rules about my phone calls to you
your 'under one minute' call that I have to follow through
so hurried are your words that my ears bypass
and then I'm supposed to say what I
want to say to you fast
I'm sorry but I can't think straight under pressure
I'm just so glad to hear your voice that I treasure
I forget whatever I want to say to you
by the time I remember...your one minute's due!!
perhaps for a few more days
until after Eid
what am I going to do my love?
As though the distance between us is not enough?
But I want you to know that I am still fasting
and I'm following the rules very strictly
I'm happy that this act ties you to me
that we're doing something together knowingly
At least you have your work to divert your mind
and not think of me all the time
but your wife no matter what she does...
to NOT think about her husband so much
somehow he dominates her mind all the time
and she doesn't know if this is a crime
Hello my husband how are you today?
I ask whether you slept well yesterday?
Are you taking good care of yourself?
Why isn't your face shaved well?
I want you to know that...
this heart is beating only for you
that You are in my pulse forever true
though thousands of miles away
your wife is definitely here to stay
and this is a promise I make to you
no matter what may come our way.
-SHF-
6 comments:
Wow! Who is this beautiful,sexy lady Neneps? Is she the wife you wrote about in this poem?
How can her husband leave such a beautiful and caring wife behind...thousands of miles away?
I can really connect with her deep longing and love for him.
Beautiful poem and beautiful woman.
Terence(FRANCE)
She's a sexy lady this woman in the photo. Who is she Neneps? Is she a relative or friend of yours?
It's so sad that she's separated from her husband. Perhaps he's working overseas?
I don't know how the husband can have the heart to go somewhere far away and not take her with him. She's his wife for goodness sake? Are there some immigration problems involved?
Touching poem. She's reaching out so much to the man she loves. So sad.
Dillon Walia(CANADA)
This is a real photo of someone you know Neneps. I can sense that. Great love poem.
The lady in the photo is cute and adorable. She's got a sexy smile and the look that she gives in this photo...really,I'm melting!!
I am looking at her photo over and over again.
What's that red mark in the middle of her forehead? Too bad she's married. If I were her husband,I wouldn't leave her for a second! LOL
Jonas Hushi(SOUTH AFRICA)
Excellent poem for lovers and husbands and wives. You write beautifully Neneps.
This is the first time you have uploaded a real photo instead of the ones from the web I guess. She's a beautiful lady...perhaps of South American and Indian descent? I'm just guessing here. Perhaps she's Arabic...I don't know.
I guess she told you her story and you have written it in the form of a poem on her behalf. So nice of you Neneps.
And to the husband I want him to know that he should keep in touch with his wife. Look at her. She's so loyal to you and she's only thinking about you! She's thousands of miles away from you and you are lucky that she has not fallen for other men who I am sure will find her very desirable...I for one do. She's very exotic looking and that's a turn on.
Charles In Charge(USA)
This poem has tinged my heart!! So sad. I am so touched by the way the wife expressess her concern over her husband who is so far away.
Why doesn't he want to talk to her longer? What's wrong with him? She wants to so deperately hear his voice and get in touch with him.
Look at the way you wrote about her obsession with him. So detailed. I wonder whether a wife can be so in love with her husband like that? She even asked why he didn't get a good shave!LOL
I think that she must have seen him on webcam or he would have told her about it.
Neneps! Please write a poem about this couple reuniting soon. I think that you can write a tele-serial script! Good luck.
Baliwal Singh (New Delhi,INDIA)
Her hubby's in her pulse? How creative can you get Neneps? I just love the way you write.
Long distance relationships are hard to maintain but if she loves him like the way she does...she's hooked on to him for life and perhaps for the next few lives!
Quasimodo(TRINIDAD AND TOBAGO)
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