I am so looking forward to our first night
that beautiful night when you and I become one
Me the blushing bride and you the handsome groom
just the two of us in our bedroom
Although we've known each other for some time
and we've talked about very intimate things
but our first night will be the night
when all our desires will come to light
You know I love you so, so much
I can't wait for the day when my body you'll touch
all my passion just centered on you
my lover, my husband...my love so true
Our first night...
I enter our bedroom dressed as a traditional bride
I seek your blessings by touching your feet
you lift me up and caress my cheeks
I ask for you to place your right foot
just on top of mine ...
thus symbolizing the dominant one you are
and I your humble wife incline
You make me sit beside you
and I give you some sweet milk to drink
you drink some of it first
and then you give me some to quench my thirst
The night is young and so are we
you bring me closer to you gently
My veil you remove very slowly
and we gaze at each other's eyes lovingly
Oh my darling what would I like you to do to me?
I've suppressed all my feelings all this time
just for this special day to be
Take me in your arms and kiss me first
not just a smack but a kiss that thirsts
undress me my love
take all my clothes away
see me as I am
my body's here to stay
Love not just me but my imperfect body
Love my womanhood and my nudity
Kiss me all over please be gentle with me
look into my eyes and lie on top of me
Do as you please unto my body
for anything you do will surely pleasure me
I'd love to undress you one by one
go down on you and use my wet mouth and tongue
I've heard of something that's called sixty nine
If we can do it tonight, that will be divine
Make love to me my husband that is all I ask of you
All night long until early next day too
I'd like to explore your masculine body
for that is my territory...
I'm like a predator and I'm very hungry
I don't know what I'll do to you
...hurt you I may
but it will be in a pleasurable way
Rock me my darling and ride me high
first from the front and then from the back
never slow down for I want to cry
in deep pleasance and utmost joy
When you enter inside me, it is our ultimate union
I, your wife and you my husband
Our first night...
no longer am I the blushing bride
Our marriage now consummated
a new life there is to look forward
honey, let's have our first night everyday
if that is with you my darling okay.
-SHF-
14 comments:
Hey! I thought first wedding night's is extinct. Couples wait that long for a screw?
Wo! The Blushing bride has become an animal in bed. It's a feel good poem.
Chandrasuria
This poem reminds me of a scene from a Bollywood movie only more realistic because we are given a picture of what happens in detail. I LOVE IT!
Wunderbar
Neneps! Neneps! The more you write about these things...the more I am addicted to you. Let me be your husband and I'll show you what our first night is going to be all about.
Where is your photo?
IWANTTOBEYOURLOVER
Ilustrative description of a very romantic future 'First Night' between a husband and wife who truly love each other.
It's very rare to find a bride describing her inner most desires for her groom and looking forward to her wedding night.
There is almost a celestial innocence about her. She projects herself as the blushing bride...all shy and very composed but she becomes curious and gives in to her desires and passions and thus becomes a confident and willing partner in bed.
What more can you ask of a wife? She's a wonderful woman to behold and be married to.
Fantastic work and great picture Neneps my darling!!
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Mashoor Halwa
Is there such a thing as a first night between a newly married couple? I gather then that they've NEVER made love before their wedding? Hmmm...how would the bride know whether the groom is a good lover or not? What if he sucks in bed?
Always test the merchandise before buying it...this applies to both the couples.
LOVE DOCTOR
This 'first night' thing is new to me. I am from a different culture than yours. I'd feel very ackward making love to my wife for the first time AFTER our marriage and that too in such an elaborate setting of culture and tradition.
It does sound romantic in some ways but it's a little difficult for me to digest all this.
Just James (Ontario,CANADA)
Sixty nine on the first night itself? She's a predator and he's her prey? Wow! Wow! Wow! Lucky,lucky guy.
Green with Jealousy (Perak, MALAYSIA)
I don't think that it's proper for a bride to look forward to her first night at all. In fact it should scare the living daylights out of her.
It is not something nice to look forward to. She shouldn't even think about it. It's NEVER pleasant and is very painful.
EXPERIENCED FIRST NIGTHER(Chennai,INDIA)
Neneps! Absolutely fabulous! What else can I say?
You narrated the first night scene well and wrote it in such a way that it was not vulgar but terribly romantic and very natural. Congratulations to you for coming up with this poem.
Looking forward to reading more of your poems.
Camelot Crazy
What's 69? Can't understand that.
WHAT'S UP
69 is passionate oral sex dummy! It's the BEST!
KNOW IT ALL
This poem is sex all coated in sugar. But sex in a nice way. I like the sweet milk part and the guy placing his foot on the girl's. How romantic is that?
The removing of the veil...hmmm...trying to picture what kind of lingerie the bride was wearing and if the groom wore a G-string! LOL
Victor (Hyderabad,INDIA)
I became so horny reading this poem. Am getting married soon and I hope to god that my wife is like this bride in the poem. I am hoping and praying SO HARD!
Mine is a typical arranged marriage and so I am so looking forward to my first night.
I want my future wife to tell me how she wants to be made love to and the 69 thing...can't wait to try that on her. Hope she likes it though. She's very holy and traditional.:(
Future Husband (Orissa,INDIA)
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